Term 3: Week 1- The Downfall of Dumpty

During this week, I have most of my shotlist and treatment nearly done. Mr Andrews read over my shotlist for feedback.

Feedback:

  • Simplify the shot description
  • Short the dialogue and voice-over
  • Breakdown the action into two or more 
  • Make sure that the shot description matches the action


Afterwards, I continue working on the shotlist and treatment due to the final date being delay to next week.


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